Detox: Chapter 10

Charlaine Harris owns almost everything. I own the rest.

GabbieAnnie and I have spent months brainstorming this story. I hope you have all enjoyed it!

NSFW. At all.

Chapter 10

Sookie’s POV

Sookie smiled when she pulled away from Eric. She almost felt normal again. A normal she hadn’t experience since before she met Bill. The spell had definitely worked. She couldn’t detect a hint of longing for him. In fact, she didn’t care about him in the slightest. The only feeling that lingered was the anger of betrayal. He had used her and she wouldn’t forgive him for that. “He’s gone,” she announced.

Eric smiled.

Sookie hugged him and then got to work making her food. She laughed as she put her plate on the table. “I look like one of those 1950’s housewives from an old sitcom. I feel like I should serve you a martini or something.”

Eric chuckled. “I don’t need anything, but you should eat.” He sat with her and talked about Octavia’s spell and Pam’s visit, which were both hazy or downright absent in her mind. He told her about her fever and holding her. That part she remembered.

She nodded. “You’re like a giant ice pack. Remind me to call you when I get sick.” She smiled at the thought of seeing him again, but frowned when she realized they would have to leave soon. “When is your boss coming?” she asked, finishing her meal.

“She’s not. We’re going to her. Tomorrow night,” he added sounding like she felt: miserable.

Sookie started doing dishes, keeping her back to him. “So you talked to her?”

“Yes, I called after Octavia left.” The next time he spoke, she could feel his breath on her neck. “I talked to her about my promise.”

She turned to face him, their bodies almost touching. “And?”

“Untouched means not under the influence of my blood.”

“Oh.” She smiled and her heart raced. “I haven’t had your blood.”

He shook his head, his hair falling over his eyes.

She pushed his hair behind his ears and caressed his face. “So that means we can…” She swallowed hard, unable to complete her sentence. Every cell in her body celebrated the good news.


“We have a whole night to ourselves.” She kissed him, sucking on his bottom lip. “You know that I haven’t… That I don’t know anything about…” She blushed and looked down.

“I understand,” he said, raising her chin so he could kiss her again. He pushed his tongue inside her mouth and then lifted her off the ground.

She wrapped her feet around him as if they were flying again, and for all she knew, they might’ve been. They moved effortlessly down the hall and into her bedroom. She was grateful that she had changed the sheet on her bed after her shower; using the one Pam brought to replace the one tainted by sickness.

Eric sat on the edge of the bed and Sookie wiggled on top of his lap, her dress fanning around her legs. She let her heels drop to the ground. “You feel so good,” he whispered against her lips before kissing her again and thrusting his hips up. She gasped and then moaned when desire sparked her nerves. His hands roved over her waist, hips, and ass, touching every spot as if he’d never touched her before.

She sucked on his tongue, scraping it with her teeth. He moaned and thrust again. His hands moved toward the zipper holding her dress together, sliding it down. She jumped as his cool fingers dipped inside, caressing her bare back. The skinny straps sagged against her shoulders and with a little shrug they fell down her arms. She pushed the dress down, slowly exposing her naked breasts.

“You’re not wearing anything,” Eric said, leaning backward slightly and staring at her nipples.

“I didn’t have a strapless bra, so I went without,” she explained. He seemed frozen, staring and unmoving. Heat crept across her chest. She’d never felt more exposed. She was about to pull her dress back up when Eric started kissing her. First her mouth, then her neck, and finally her breasts. He cupped them and sucked on her nipples, making them impossibly hard. She held onto his shoulders and arched her back, dipping her hips down and forcing her breasts closer to his face. His dick rubbed against her while he lapped at her sensitive skin. She moved faster and faster, holding on tightly as her orgasm built. She moaned and gripped his shirt, but before she could come, he flipped them. Eric tore off his shirt and loomed over her, kissing, licking, and sucking his way down her body, pulling her dress off, finally dropping it onto the floor.

He hovered over her panties and growled and then kissed the inside of her thigh. She dug her fingers into his hair and squeezed her eyes shut. He turned his face and kissed a line straight across her pussy to the other thigh.

“Please,” she begged. Her head swam in a sea of bliss. She needed him.

He pulled her panties to the side and planted a kiss on her slippery lips. She bucked under his mouth, so he held her hips firmly. His tongue thrusting inside her followed the next kiss. “Fuck,” he whispered, and then he did it again: thrusting, kissing, and sucking.

She screamed and her entire body exploded, but his tongue never relented, thrusting until she collapsed under him.

He hooked the waistband of her panties and dragged them off her legs, caressing her sex with his thumb, spreading her lips, and rubbing her clit.

She propped herself up on her elbows, ready for more. She couldn’t tear her eyes away. His thumb circled slowly while his middle finger slid up and down her slit. She had to remember to breathe, especially when he pushed his finger inside her. He smiled and rubbed her clit faster than she could follow and then began thrusting and curling his finger. He squeezed her breast, rolling her nipple between his fingers while he finger fucked her. In a matter of seconds, she was reduced to a twitching pile of flesh, screaming and writhing as another orgasm washed over her. Her pussy fluttered around his digit as he pulled out of her, and then he sucked his finger clean. He closed his eyes for a moment.

She sat up the rest of the way and grabbed the waistband of his jeans, looking up at him as she unbuttoned them. His eyes snapped open as she pushed them off. She eyed his massive bulge with excitement and fear. The fear made her hesitate.

He put his hand on top of hers and guided her. “Touch me,” he said, closing his eyes again as she explored.

As the seconds passed, her bravery grew. She dipped a hand inside his underwear and followed his length, surprised at the sheer size. Her courage wavered, so he helped. He pushed his remaining clothing off, leaving them in a pile on the floor. His cock jutted toward her. She looked from it to his face and gave him an uneasy smile.

“Don’t be nervous,” he said, kneeling on the edge of the bed between her legs. She scooted backward, making room for him. “Guide me.”

She took a deep, shuddering breath and nodded.

“Sookie, do you want me?” he asked.

“Yes,” she said, finally finding her words. “I want you. I want this.” She reached between their bodies with a tentative hand and caressed his cock again. His hips lurched.

Supporting himself with one hand, he used the other to dip between her legs. She moaned, and then he kissed her. She wrapped her legs around his thighs, pulling him closer and closer until the smooth head of his dick rubbed against her quivering lips.

“Oh shit,” she breathed. This is it. It’s finally happening!

“It’s okay. Relax.” He rubbed her clit, sending a tremor of pleasure through her.

She kissed him again. “Yes.” She filled her body with that word. She had never wanted anyone or anything so much in all her life. She relaxed into the mattress and dragged him down with her. Still holding his shaft, she guided him to her entrance. With the next exhale she lifted her hips, taking him in a fraction of an inch. Breathe. She let go of his cock and gripped his ass, pulling him down a little more with each breath, working through the discomfort by relaxing. He filled her completely … and then he started moving.

It was slow at first, each thrust was careful, calculated. She closed her eyes and focused on each new sensation: the ripples of energy with each thrust, and the wanting with each withdraw. She began the ascent toward climax. She lifted to meet his hips, needing more, her fingers digging into his muscular ass.

Eric groaned and his hips jerked, smashing her clit with the next thrust. She gasped and sighed, and he responded by pulling out almost all the way, leaving a void inside her.

“Please,” she whined.

He slid into her again, eliciting another gasp-sigh combo. He smiled, his fangs flashing from his upper lip.


“Say it again,” he whispered.

She lifted her head and kissed him. “Yes, Eric,” she said into his mouth. He grunted and his hips jerked hard. “Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes!” She closed her eyes and started falling, her mind spinning as bliss overpowered her senses.

Eric’s body went rigid and then his dick swelled inside her.

She clutched at his body, holding onto him as if he were the only thing tethering her to earth, her breasts pressed against his chest, her heart pounding, her mouth fused to his. She tore away to breathe. “That was … the most amazing thing I’ve ever experienced.”

Eric propped himself up on one elbow. “Yes it was.” He kissed her sweetly. “I didn’t hurt you, did I?” His forehead creased.

She smiled. “No. I just needed to relax, that’s all.” She touched his face. “Thank you. Thank you for this week, for watching over me, for giving me exactly what I needed.”

He laughed and kissed her face all over. “You gave me just what I needed too. I have a feeling things aren’t going to be the same in New Orleans once you get there.” He looked at her for a minute. She could see his mind working, trying to figure out what to say before going on. “She’s going to offer you a job.”

“Who’s going to offer me a job?”

“My boss, the queen of Louisiana.”

Her mouth hung open as she tried to wrap her brain around so much new information. “Wait, what? The vampire queen of Louisiana wants to offer me a job? Doing what?”

He hesitated again. “Telepaths are extremely rare, especially in the human world. I’ve never met one before, and I’ve been around for a while.” He smiled. “That’s why she wants to meet you.”

“Why didn’t you tell me?” All that time, she’d been worried sick about what Eric’s boss could possibly want with her.

“Because I didn’t trust you.” He looked away briefly. “Are you going to take it?”

“I don’t know.” Everything in her life would change, and that scared her. “What do you think?”

“She’ll pay you well, you’ll have great benefits, you’ll get to live in a big city, and you could go to college if you want.”

She grinned. “You make a compelling case.”

“Plus, you could see me,” he murmured as his dick hardened inside her.

“Your case just got better.” She kissed him and sighed when he gripped her hips and rolled onto his back, putting her on top. She leaned against his chest and followed his lead until she learned how to move. Once she took over, he raised his head and sucked on her nipples, only intensifying the sensations controlling her body. When she closed her eyes she was overwhelmed by happiness. For the first time in her life, she could see the future she wanted.

She didn’t have to think about it anymore. Tomorrow night, when she got offered a job, she would say yes.

The End

Well? What do you think? I want to hear from you all!

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70 thoughts on “Detox: Chapter 10

  1. saldred75 says:

    good story!!! is there going to be an epilogue? I wanted to know what happened once they got to nola?


  2. sluggysmom says:

    Loved it! Would also love an epilogue to give us a little peak at their lives in New Orleans.

    Looking forward to your next story!



  3. Alyanne says:

    You have this uncanny ability to make me both love and hate Friday’s. I love ’em because that’s when we get a new chapter. I hate ’em because we have to wait till the next one to get another! Grrrrrr! I really hope ur next story is a continuation of these two. It’s not done yet. I wanna know why it was so dang important to have Sookie “untouched” by vampire. I wanna see QSA publicly admonish Bill for being such a fuck up. OH and we all hope Eric gets his chance to play! LOVE YOUR BRAIN! More please!!!!!!


    • Thank you so much for reviewing! I absolutely love when I read one like this. You told me what you loved and what you wanted and it makes me that much happier to keep writing! The next story is something different, but I think you’ll like it. As for this story, a sequel is needed as far as I’m concerned. 🙂 Thanks again!!


  4. mom2goalies says:

    Wonderful story, and another vote for an epilogue from me!
    Looking forward to your new story also!


  5. what a perfect lemony goodness to end the day! 😉


  6. ljhjelm says:

    I loved it. Sorry it ended, but I know you will write another. Thank you.


  7. tiffsmith05 says:

    One Of my favs. Looking forward to more from you.😀😀😀😀😀


  8. tiffsmith05 says:

    No more Detox Fridays 😢


  9. ericluver says:

    Yes. Definitely an epilogue. I’d like to think that everything went well and she ended up bonded to Eric and getting a degree and doing her work for the queen. A happy life!
    But really enjoyed the story whether you do an epilogue or not 😀


    • There’s too much to cover with just an epilogue. I’m thinking of the sequel, and you’re right about getting a degree and being with Eric. All good things come to those who work hard for it, right? 🙂 I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for all your reviews and love. 🙂


  10. lostinspace33 says:

    This has been an awesome little tale and I’m going to miss it, but I’m looking forward to whatever you have in store for us next.


  11. murgatroid98 says:

    Looks like the Queen of Louisiana is pretty decent. Thanks for a great story.


  12. VictoryInTrouble says:

    Yay! They finally got to have each other! I’m glad Sookie will take the job. It sounds like a good deal. And getting to see Eric is the icing on the cake! Thanks for this wonderful story! 🙂


  13. jules3677 says:

    Good story. Liked that you kept it between those two. Especially impressed that the Sookie character was semi mature about her predicament. Hoping that you may be inclined to do a chapter on Sookie being introduced to the Queen by Eric while Beehl is gagged and chained to the wall watching on. Enjoyed your story, thankyou.


    • Thank you so much for reviewing! I’m so glad you enjoyed their time together. Sookie definitely made the best of her situation, and so did Eric. 🙂 I’m thinking up the sequel, so any ideas (like Bill gagged and chained) are very welcome! 😉 Thank you for all the love!


  14. Perfecta999 says:



  15. tleel says:

    I also vote for an epilogue. I also want to know how things went for Sookie and Eric in NOLA. Loved the story you have many great stories.


  16. ashmo2000 says:

    They finally get to be together and hopefully can stay together 😍
    I loved this story and can’t wait for the next one.


  17. msbuffy says:

    I loved it! I loved the trust they built with each other, a little more with each passing evening, and the way things went from there, just as it should be! Another great one from you! 🙂


  18. valady1 says:

    Of course you have set up a completely new dynamic for what will come next for them. A Sookie who is free of any Bill influence, and understanding her options with Sophie Anne could have a very different life than canon. I do hope you decide to write a sequel, I would love to read it. And this was a lovely ending for your story.


    • Aww, thanks! Yep, I took the canon and shook it so hard it got lost somewhere. 🙂 Free Sookie is a happy Sookie. Especially now that she’s found Eric. 🙂 I’m so glad you enjoyed the ending and I think I’ll need to work on the sequel next! Thank you so much for reviewing!


  19. Kittyinaz says:

    Reblogged this on Kittyinaz's Reblog Page and commented:
    Say it aint so!! The end?!?!?! THis was great and the ending was perfect!


  20. askarsgirl says:

    Thanks for the great ending and can’t wait for your new story!


  21. […] My Secret O Detox […]


  22. YvonnAd says:

    Wow wow wee. That’s was really NSFW. What a way to end. So sexy.

    So happy to hear you have a new one coming along.
    Thank you. Thank you.


    • I’m so glad you enjoyed the lemony ending! I’m happy when you’re happy. 😉 I’m always writing, and I hope you like the next one too! Thanks for all the lovely reviews along the way!!


  23. campyrs says:

    What a great short story, I enjoyed each chapter. Epilogue was cool. Thank you so much!


  24. Oh no, thats it? A sequel would be great! You have so many great ideas. This is the 2nd story I’ve read of yours where Sookie accepts the offer from the queen. I can’t help but wonder how much freedom Sookie would be allowed. I see the queen as being very selfish and keeping sookie under lock and key so that nothing can happen to her. So I hope we can see how you would have that all play out. Would Sookie live in the palace? How much time would she get to spend with Eric? Would she get to go back and see her gran frequently? Would she get stir crazy and try to escape? We all know how independent (read: stubborn) she can be. Can’t wait to see what you’ve got for us next.


    • I know that story isn’t quite done (hence the need for a sequel), but it isn’t going to be the same setting, so this really was the end of Detox. 🙂 I always like the idea of a reasonable queen, which is how I usually write her. That’s how you’ll see her in my next story as well. 🙂 I think your questions are great though and ones I’ll keep in mind when crafting the sequel. I just love feedback like that, so keep the questions coming!! Thank you so much for reviewing, I’m so glad you enjoyed the story!

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  25. patsy1965 says:

    Well, we’ve come the end of another awesome story. I always feel melancholy after I finish one of your stories. I’d love to see how working for the queen plays out. I like an alpha Viking 😉 What is the next story going to be about? I know, I’m greedy. patsy


    • Don’t be sad, Patsy! I think a sequel is in order, now I just need to write it! LOL The next story won’t feature an alpha Viking, it’ll be an alpha Sookie. 😉 I’ll post a little blurb soon! I hope you like it too. Thanks, as always, for reviewing. I love hearing from you!


  26. theladykt says:

    sweet ending


  27. nedbella says:

    OM to the GEEEEZE LOUISE. That was brilliant. Please write a sequel. An epilogue just won’t do. There is so much to cover once she gets to New Orleans. Pretty please ( picture the eyes on puss in boots from Shrek ). LOL. Seriously though……it needs a sequel. That was truly awesome.


    • Aww, thanks!! I’m so glad you loved it! 🙂 I think you’re right. A sequel is the only way I can answer all the pressing questions you have about what happens next! I will get on it as soon as I finish the one I’m working on. 🙂 Thank you so much for your lovely review!!


  28. ericplenty says:

    Wow just read the whole story in one sitting 😉 Please continue this.


  29. lindie825 says:

    Enjoyed this story very much! I hope it’s not really the end. 🙂 Thanks for writing!


  30. Amazing story! The only thing I didn’t like about it was that it ended too soon. I would have loved to have read about some of her adventures in New Orleans. Meeting the Queen, seeing her cousin maybe getting even with Bill. Not to mention all her ADVENTURES with Eric! But it was wonderful as it was! Terrific writing!


    • Aww, thanks!! I’m so glad you enjoyed this little story. I’m still planning on a sequel, which I’ll get to next. I’ve got a few other story ideas too, so I need to prioritize. Getting even with Bill is at the top of my list. Any other ideas for what might be in store for her would be very helpful so I can start to outline the sequel! Thanks so much for reviewing (and giving feedback). 🙂


  31. Rachel says:

    Loved it!!!!!!


  32. cela says:

    i always enjoy stories where eric is her first instead of that twerp bill. thanks.


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