Sookie’s Present: Chapter 2

Charlaine Harris owns almost everything. I own the rest. Thank you, SeriousCrush. I love you to pieces! Thanks again for the inspiration Erica!

This chapter is NSFW. Really NSFW. You’ve been warned.

Chapter 2: The Gift That Keeps On Giving

Sookie’s POV


She melted into his touch and closed her eyes. “Being around you is so…relaxing.”

“I’ve never heard that before. People are usually tense around me.”

“You’re different.”

“We’ve already established that.” He took a step closer and his other hand caressed her hip.

Sookie brought her hands up between them and explored the smooth plane of crisp cotton that covered his chest. “I want you.” Sookie bit her lip and squeezed her eyes shut. “I’m not usually this blunt. You’ve scrambled my brain or something.”

Eric laughed quietly and stared into her eyes. “I want you too.” His mouth fell on top of hers, igniting a fire inside her. His lips were as cool as his fingers, and she couldn’t get enough.

“You’re yummy.” Sookie grinned and her head swam. She was glad she’d only had one drink. She wanted to remember every moment with Eric for the rest of her life.

Eric’s mouth moved down the side of her neck, licking and sucking as he went. He trailed kisses along her exposed shoulder and then across her collarbone. He tugged the material down, revealing her other shoulder and letting the material of her dress rest loosely against her breasts.

Sookie wiggled out of her wings, letting them drop to the ground. She took a sharp breath in as he kissed the slope of her breast. Her whole body tensed.

Eric stopped, his mouth hovering an inch above her skin. “I’m not going to hurt you. You have to trust me.”

Sookie nodded and let him back her up against the wall. Instead of bending over her as he’d done before, Eric fell to his knees. His face was level with her breasts. “You’re really tall.”

“It’s very helpful.” His tongue darted out, dipping between her breasts and disappearing inside the fabric of her dress. His angelic face was tilted up to hers as he kissed her skin. She watched as he pulled the top of the dress down, exposing her breasts completely. The costume slid down her waist and hung from her hips, showing a trace of her white panties. His eyes closed as he nuzzled her skin, and when he sucked her nipple into his mouth, she almost came. Her body arched away from the wall and he held her firmly, sucking one and then the other nipple into his mouth. He inhaled deeply. “You smell delicious.” He inhaled again, and this time, his face moved south until it was level with the waistband of her panties. When he looked at her again, he was no longer angelic. He had been transformed into a wild beast. The blue in his eyes was nearly gone and he looked as hungry as she felt.

“Eric.” His name came out on a breath.

“Say it again.” He nipped at her panties and gripped her ass, pulling her firmly against his face.

“Eric.” She dug her fingers into his hair.

He grabbed the waistband with his teeth and pulled them down. Sookie’s body jerked again as he scraped the sensitive skin next to her hip. With one final tug, she was naked, except for her heels. He inhaled again, and that time, it was accompanied by a deep growl. He wedged a knee between her feet and pushed them apart.

With her fingers still wrapped in his long hair, she encouraged him to keep going. Her breathing was ragged. “Eric, please.” She wanted more. She needed more.

As if he’d been waiting for her permission, he lunged toward her sex. His moan was muffled against her folds and by the whimper that escaped her throat.

Every nerve in her body exploded as his lips wrapped around her clit. Her vision blurred and she leaned her head against the wall for a moment. It was too long though, she had to watch him, watch him pleasure her with his mouth.

His fingers dug into the round globes of her ass as he lifted her leg over his shoulder. And then he was thrusting his tongue inside her. His talented mouth alternated between thrusts and licks, and when Sookie came, her scream filled the room.

“Mmm.” His mouth vibrated against her sensitive folds, sending a shock of pleasure through her again.

“Wow. I just. Wow.” Her eyes were closed and her head rested against the wall. Suddenly, the room was spinning and Sookie ended up on her back on the bed. Eric stood between her legs and smiled.

“The best is yet to come.” His confidence was beyond sexy.

Her eyes were glued to him as his fingers moved to the tiny buttons holding his shirt closed. One, and then another, and another until finally, the material hung from his shoulders revealing a body that took her breath away.

Eric smirked and tugged the shirt out of his slacks, tossing it onto the pile of clothing on the floor. His fingers touched the clasp holding them closed, and it was then that Sookie realized a large bulge in his pants was straining against the zipper. Her head began to swim. It’s happening. Really happening!

“Don’t forget to breathe.” Eric’s lips were pressed into an uneven smile.

Sookie nodded and took a gulp of air into her lungs. She propped herself up on her elbows to get a better look. His fingers moved slowly, peeling the dark material away from his muscular hips. Her arms began to quiver as he tugged his pants off, and she gasped when his erection was free from its confines. Oh. My. God.

In her limited experience, men didn’t come equipped with appendages that big. It was really big. How is that going to fit inside me? She swallowed hard and took a deep breath. Maybe this wasn’t such a good idea.

“I’m not going to hurt you. You have to trust me.” His cocky smirk was replaced with concern.

Was it genuine? Sookie trusted him enough to find out. “Okay.” Another deep breath, and he was between her legs again, sucking and licking on her slippery flesh, helping her forget her worries. Desire filled her body. When she could speak, she begged him. “I need you.”

In the blink of an eye, he was hovering over her body, kissing her sweetly. She could taste herself on his lips. “I need you too.” The smooth head of his cock pressed against her entrance, nudging her lips open.

Sookie moaned and wrapped her arms around his neck. Relax. She squeezed her eyes shut tight and focused on the sensations filling her body. He pushed forward gently, stretching and filling her. With every exhale, he was able to push deeper until he was in her all the way. Every muscle in Eric’s body tensed, right down to his eyelids.

Breathe. Relax. Enjoy your gift. Sookie let go the rest of the way, and her body melted under his. She caressed his face, and the muscles in his jaw jumped under her fingers. “Eric?”

His eyes snapped open. They were filled with pain.

“Are you okay?” Her forehead creased with worry and she wiggled a little to try and get a better look, only to be reminded that she was pinned to the bed. By his cock, which twitched inside her. Her raw nerves radiated heat through her body.

“Better than okay. So good.” He exhaled. “I’m trying not to hurt you, but you’re so hot and tight. So good.”

Sookie blushed and let her body relax.

“If you keep moving, I’m going to have a hard time holding back.”

“Holding what back?” She frowned and touched his troubled face.

“The desire to fuck you. Hard and fast. Long and slow. All night long.” The words were forced through clenched teeth.

She giggled. “Why don’t we start with long and slow?”

He began moving then, pushing in and out incredibly slowly. Her body adjusted quickly, learning how to move with him, and more importantly, how to move against him. Her clit hit his body each time he thrust into her, drawing another orgasm out of her. That time, when she came, Eric put his mouth over hers, devouring the sounds of her pleasure.

His face was drawn tight as she rode the waves of release.

“Did you feel that?” she whispered into his mouth as she smoothed his forehead.

“Yes.” It was more of a growl than a word. He drew one of her legs up and tucked it under his arm. Angling his body slightly, he spiraled his hips, driving into her until she was on the verge of another orgasm. He pulled out almost all the way with every thrust, driving her wild. It was definitely long and slow, and Sookie couldn’t stand it for another minute.

“Hard and fast. Please?”

A wicked grin spread across Eric’s face.

He moved so fast she had a hard time following him. Her eyes got tired of trying so she closed them and gave herself to him. It didn’t take long for her to scream his name, and that time, Eric grunted as his cock swelled inside her. He leaned on one arm and rolled their bodies so she was on top of him.

Exhausted, she relaxed against his chest. She nuzzled the muscular plane, committing every ripple to memory. She inhaled deeply, setting the memory in place with his delicious scent. “God you smell good.”

“You smell good, feel good, and taste good.” He tucked a strand of hair behind her ear.

Sookie blushed. “No one has ever tasted me like that before. I liked it. A lot.”

“I did too.” He pulled her into a kiss where his tongue swept inside her mouth. “Can I make a request?”

“What?” Her heart began to pound. What if she wasn’t good enough?

“Wear your wings.”

“My wings?”

“Go get them, and then come back and fuck me again.” His fingers dug into her hips, as he thrust up into her. He was still hard.

“Okay.” She bit her lip and struggled to stand. He helped by lifting her off, and her body trembled at the loss of contact. The insides of her thighs slipped together, coated with the fluids from their union. Her legs wobbled as she walked to the piles of clothes on the floor, where her dress and his pants were tangled in an intimate embrace. She pulled her wings on and turned to face Eric. “Like this?” She crawled up his body, drinking in the sight of his muscular legs and enormous cock.

“Yes. Now fuck me.”

No one had ever talked to her like that. They had thought it, but never said it right out loud. He made every inch of her body sing.

She straddled his legs and gripped his dick at the base. It was shiny and wet, just like her thighs. She leaned back, letting her slick lips kiss his length. She moaned when the head rubbed against her clit.

His impatient hands lifted her body, and then she relaxed, impaling herself on him. Tiny jolts of pleasure shot through her, stilling her movement, and then he was guiding her, forward and back, dipping down and then up. Riding him in a perfect elliptical rhythm. Her nails dug into his chest and her mouth hung open as a low moan surrounded them. It didn’t seem like it could be coming from her, and yet it was.

Eric’s hand left her hip and moved up the side of her body. Lighting for a moment on her breast and then flicking her wing. They danced on her back, as if she were flying. He dug his fingers into her hair, pulling her into another kiss, but their mouths met too hard and her lip split against his teeth.

“I’m so sorry,” he mumbled against her bleeding mouth, but continued to kiss and thrust into her, never relenting.

Sookie forgot the pain and concentrated on the pleasure. Eric’s hips jerked erratically and he moaned into her mouth. He came for the second time, but it did not slow him, he continued to thrust, suck, and lick only building to another orgasm.

She matched his speed, bruising her thighs against his hard body and kissing him harder than before. When she came, he came with her. Blood pounded in her ears as she waited to catch her breath. She tentatively touched her lip, surprised that it wasn’t bleeding. Maybe it never had.

“Sorry, I probably gave you a bruise,” Eric said as his thumb replaced her fingertips, tracing her bottom lip. His pale skin had a hint of a flush.

“I thought it was bleeding. Guess not.” She shrugged, making her wings flutter above her. She smiled. “Is that what you had in mind?”

Eric nodded. “I’ve never been fucked by a fairy before.”

A new wave of lust washed over Sookie. “Why does that turn me on so much?”

“What? When I say fuck?”

Sookie swallowed hard and nodded.

“Because it’s what you need. A nice. Long. Fuck.” Eric started moving again, slow and hard, a pause between each brutal thrust.

“Mm hmm. I need it.” She arched her back, holding on to his chest for dear life and letting the intense euphoria roll through her.

Eric’s erection was on a never-ending loop. Sookie chalked it up to a little blue pill she always heard people talking about. Despite his obvious readiness to have sex with her all night long, Sookie fell into bed next to him, exhausted. He caressed her back, straightening the metal frame of her wings. “Sleep.”

“Hold me?” Her eyes fluttered shut as she nuzzled against his shoulder.

“I’m not going anywhere.” His voice soothed her.

“Mm. Thank you.” A smile was frozen on her lips.

“Happy Birthday.”

“You were the best present ever.” Her eyes closed for what she thought was only a moment, but the next time she opened them, sunlight poured into the room. “Good mor—” Her wings bent as she rolled over. The smile on her lips shriveled. She was alone.


Sookie yanked the wings off her back and threw them at the headboard, where they disappeared. Her legs quavered as she walked into the bathroom. Her thighs were bruised and every muscle in her body ached. A shower seemed like a good idea.

As the hot water cascaded down her body, Sookie began to cry. He was gone. She knew it happened to other people, but she never thought it would happen to her. She had given him everything and he didn’t even bother to stick around. She trusted him. At that moment, she resolved to never let that happen again.

Dawn was waiting in the room when she came out. She was grinning from ear to ear. “Well? Spill!”

Sookie chuckled weakly and flopped on the bed. “He left. Without saying goodbye.”

Dawn frowned. “Before or after?”

“After.” Sookie was on the verge of tears again when Dawn squealed.

“So you did it? You got your special birthday present?” She squeezed Sookie into a tight hug.

“We did it. A lot.” Sookie couldn’t help but smile as memories of the night before came back to her.

A low whistle came out of Dawn’s mouth. “I wish my first time had been with a man like him. Nope. It was Bobby Richmond. All clammy and nervous. So, tell me all about Rick.”

“Eric,” Sookie corrected. “I can’t even remember how many times we did it, but I’ll tell you, I’m bruised.”

Dawn laughed. “Sounds like you went through a whole package of condoms.”

Sookie’s eyes widened and her mouth hung open. She hadn’t even thought about using condoms. She covered her face with her hands. “We didn’t use any.”

Dawn smacked her arm. “What were you thinking?”

“I wasn’t! Obviously.” Sookie fell back onto the bed. “Perfect. I guess I’ll go get tested for STIs when we get home.”

“And a pregnancy test. Honestly, Sookie, how could you forget?”

Sookie shrugged. “He kept looking at me with those eyes, and kissing me with those lips. I could hardly remember to breathe, let alone think about anything.” A tight knot formed in her stomach. They needed to talk about something else. Anything else. “What about Brian?”

“Good for about three minutes.” Dawn shrugged. “He’s nice enough though. I didn’t have to pepper spray him.” She got up and started packing her suitcase. “I think we should go so you can take care of stuff at home.”

Stuff. Sookie wanted to laugh but couldn’t. She had sexually transmitted infection and pregnancy tests ahead of her. If she could’ve, Sookie would’ve died on the spot.


Poor Sookie, if only she knew the truth! I hope you enjoyed it.

I’m going to shamelessly plug my new short story, Kiss & Ride available on Amazon.

On to Sookie’s Present: Chapter 3

52 thoughts on “Sookie’s Present: Chapter 2

  1. ozzo says:

    AWWW! They need to be together


  2. theladykt says:

    Hmmm If we all couldn’t have had such a great first time. Yummy


  3. Elizabeth Murray says:

    Wait there’s more right???? Evil for leaving me hang!


  4. DAMN! I had some great Mardi Gras experiences, but nothing that comes close to that! lol


    • LOL I think Eric makes everything better, so clearly, the next time you celebrate Mardi Gras, you need to take him with you. When that happens, I want to see pics. 🙂 Thanks for reviewing, I do hope you enjoyed it!


  5. Kim says:

    My first time was terrible, wish I can go back and wait for Eric. Isn’t he sneaky though? Biting her lip and making it bleed. Hmm so unprotected sex with a vampire, yes hmm. Consequences in the future?? Thanks for sharing.


    • You and me both. I have a feeling that is the way it was for most women…all of us could’ve benefited from our very own Viking. 🙂 Yes, he’s very sneaky! I expect nothing less from him. There more coming, so I hope you enjoyed this chapter and will enjoy the ones coming up as well! Thanks for reviewing!


  6. Aww damn! He could have left a note!!!!!! Oh wait I did that to a guy once….


    • LOL You’re that guy? Funny…I actually address the note-leaving issue in an upcoming chapter. I’m seriously laughing. It’s like you’re in my head. Weird in there, isn’t it? I hope you enjoyed it. More is on the way! Thanks so much for reviewing!


      • Lol!!!!! Actually I left the note for my husband after our first night together. I had to be at work by 7 and we didn’t go to bed til 4….you get the idea!!!! Can’t wait for more!!!! Is this going to be one of your longer stories or just a few chapters?


      • It’s going to be a handful of chapters…nothing like Getaway. 🙂 Nothing will ever be as long as Getaway though, that sucker is the length of two novels. LOL

        Sounds like you married the right guy. Anyone who can keep you awake until 4 is a keeper as far as I’m concerned. 🙂 It’s a similar situation over here. Glad you left him a note, it really is the best move after a night like that. 🙂


  7. padore says:

    I don’t smoke….but I may start after that chapter! Please tell me that we don’t have to wait long for more…….


    • Please don’t take up smoking on my account. I’m glad you enjoyed it…cold showers work pretty well too. Or just grabbing the first willing man and working out all that energy. 🙂 Wait long? How long is that? Thank you for reviewing!!


  8. duckbutt60 says:

    Hmmm…so Eric now has a bit of “Sookie GPS” in him —wish he had left her a note –he’s famous for his notes 🙂


  9. honulvr says:

    Please tell me she doesn’t have to wait until the revelation to see him again! Also, please tell me it’s not a five year waiting period between this and her next sexual experience….although, there is absolutely no way any other man will live up so maybe it is better she wait? 🙂 Loved it! As always you are good with the smut, woman!


    • Aww, thanks! I do aim to please (writing smut and otherwise), so I’m glad you loved it! 🙂 I guess I can’t tell you anything about the upcoming chapters. Sorry. You told me not to! No one could measure up to Eric. No one. Thanks for reviewing, always lovely to hear from you!


  10. msbuffy says:

    I really picked a terrible time to quit smoking…GAH! Coming to you live, from in front of my open freezer! That was fabulous! How gallant of Eric to give Sookie such a wonderful first time; we all know that only happens in fiction! He should have left her a note, but then she hasn’t really looked, has she? Thanks for awesome chapter!
    Shamelessly plug away for that story all you want! You worked hard for that!


    • Thanks for being understanding about the shameless plug. I’ve got to do it somewhere, right? 🙂 I’m so sorry to leave you high and dry with no way to sate your appetite. If I find a Viking, I’ll send him over.

      My first time was terrible too, and then I tried again (with a different person) and it was amazing…like having my very own Viking, only shorter. 🙂 Sometimes life is as good as fiction, and for the rest of the time, I’ll just write something good. 🙂

      Thank you for that lovely review! I’m so glad you enjoyed it!


  11. angel921 says:

    My first was amazing but God it was nothing like this, can’t wait for more!


    • LOL Good to hear it’s possible for a good first time! Eric has to go above and beyond though, I think it’s in his contract…if he had one, it definitely would be. Thanks so much for reviewing, I’m glad you followed me here. 🙂


  12. Julianne says:

    I’m hoping Eric’s had enough of a taste to do a little fairy hunting 😉


  13. patsy1965 says:

    Loved this chapter, and now I need a really cold shower. Poor Sookie, I think she’s a little more invested than she thought she’d be. I’m curious to know what Eric is thinking. patsy


    • I’m so glad you loved it! And yes, cold showers are helpful. I think most women tend to get ahead of themselves when it comes to fantasizing about how things are ‘supposed’ to be. You’re going to get your wish in the next chapter, it’s Eric’s POV. 🙂 Thanks so much for reviewing!


  14. JLD1218 says:

    What a different Sookie … interesting and kinda exciting! And Sookie friends with Dawn !! … a friendship that seems to be mutual and nothing like the one-sided one Sookie had with Arlene who was only her friend when she needed something
    LOVE what I’ve read so far! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

    (I’m going copy and paste this on your wordpress which is where I read this 2nd chapter!!)


    • I love to take the characters Charlaine created and make them my own. 🙂 I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. We’re about to see what Eric thinks about all this, and then there’ll be a shift into the first book. I always hated the way CH wrote Sookie’s friends (or lack there of), it always made me feel sorry for her for not having real friendships or relationships. You know? Thank you so much for reviewing and following my story all the way over to my wordpress. 🙂


  15. ashmo2000 says:

    HAP-PY. BIRTHDAY. .. That was a nigh of firts that won’t soon be forgotten. .. especially how things were left. Wonder how Eric’s feeling about it all.


  16. Yvonn Ad says:

    Hi hi, wow what a way to come back to your website and see 2 new chapter. So nice and H O T!!!
    The books on the are epubs, right? I just want to check before i purchase them? So excited.

    Cant wait for chapter 3…..sooon pls.



    • Yvonn Ad says:

      Ok never mind about my epub question, got both of your books. Just have to find the time to read them. I love them already. Keep up with the great stories. Thanks.


    • Woo! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 It’s good to have you back!

      Yep, all my books are epub, lsbooks offers MANY different formats, so you should find one your e-reader can handle. 🙂 Thanks for the interest in my books! 🙂


      • Yvonn Ad says:

        Hi, OMG i could wait and started reading Orchilds for Lila…. Let just say i needed to open a window cause it gets very HOT. I think i got dizzy at one point LOL. LOve it.
        I was able to purchase from Lsbooks. Love that site so straight forward. I saw the ones from Amason and i originally wanted to purchase from there to get all 3 of them, but i couldnt figure out how to purchase it. I just have it on the wish list. So i finally went to the LSbooks site and i only got the 2. Can you put the 3rd one there so i can get it also. If not i’ll just figure amazon out. I’ve never purchase anything of Amazon before.
        Thanks al lot,


      • I’m so glad you’re enjoying Orchids for Lila. 🙂 It’s filled with lots and lots of sex. You’ll see. 🙂 I love the LSbooks site too, since they offer ebooks in so many formats. Unfortunately, I can’t publish Kiss & Ride with Liquid Silver because it’s not long enough to meet their criteria (minimum word count isn’t high enough), so the only way you can get it is through Amazon. I did a little searching, and apparently, there are apps for Mac that make it so you can read Kindle books on your computer. Not sure about PCs. Good luck with that. 🙂 Thank you again for buying my books, I do hope you love them. 🙂


  17. Yvonn Ad says:

    Hi, where can i comment or review about your books. Cause i need to tell you that i love them. Ok ok, i’ve only finish Orchid (love it!!!). And i just started Sweet Chemistry….i love the story already and im only a few chapters in. Thanks again for making my heart ache (for Sweet Chemistry). Who needs sleep… Got to finish this. LOL


    • Yvonn– I would love for you to review on Amazon or Goodreads…then I’ll feature them on my September blog. 🙂 I am SO glad you loved Orchids, and that you’re already pulled into Sweet Chemistry. You made my day!!! You can review on Amazon without signing in, but you’ll need a goodreads account to review there. I think Amazon is better, but either place would be wonderful! Thank you so much!!!


  18. itsamia71 says:

    Whew that was certainly special! I felt so sorry for Sookie in the morning tho. That horrible sinking feeling that things weren’t as special as she thought. I guess Eric’s gonna have to work for it now!!


    • Yep, they both won and lost, at the same time. If only Eric had not been so brain-impared, and Sookie had known enough to ask the right questions. 🙂 I hope you’re enjoying it still…and yes, Eric is going to have to work really hard to impress her. 🙂


  19. redjane12 says:

    Love the premise of the story! I feel terrible for Sookie who of course can only assume Eric just wanted to hook up with her and couldn’t be bothered to say goodbye or leave a note… Especially for her first time that is rough for Sookie… I hope she makes Eric pay when she sees him again!


    • Oh he’s going to pay…and he’s going to take it. 🙂 It’s a bad situation for them both, no communication means no way of finding each other. I’ll make sure it happens though, don’t you worry. 🙂


  20. gyllene says:

    Just bought your story! I hate that she thinks he just left especially since it was her first time. Poor Sookie, going to get an STI and pregnancy test done. Looking forward to how they will find each other again. Maybe Eric looked through her purse 😉


    • Eric wasn’t that crafty…as you know since you’ve just read the rest of the story (so far!). 🙂 They’re both in a sad state of mind and need to fix a lot between them before they can expect anything good happen! Thanks for reviewing!!


  21. geenakmom says:

    Happy Birthday to Sookie! What a fabulous first time for her, wish mine was half as good.

    I can understand her hurt feelings after it being her first time plus the marathon that it was. Did he leave a note? Did she look for one? Did he get enough of a taste of Sookie that he can find her again?

    I find it funny she’s going to get tested (cuz he’s a vamp) but it’s the logical thing to do given the situation.


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