Glamoured: Chapter 14

Charlaine Harris owns almost everything. I own the rest. Thank you to SeriousCrush who read and loved this chapter. All remaining mistakes are my own. 🙂 NSFW!!!!

The POV shifts between Eric and Sookie in this chapter.


Chapter 14

Eric’s words hung in the air.

My plans?” Sookie swallowed hard. Her heart was racing.

“Yes. Should I take you home?” He had to make sure she was ready. No more mistakes. He could wait forever, if he had to. “Or…”

“Or maybe, you could take me to your house?” Sookie whispered as she looked into the empty dish in front of her, with only the barest trace of chocolate still remaining.

For a moment, Eric was sure his heart was going to start beating again. “Nothing would please me more.” He pushed away from the table, left a pile of cash, and escorted her outside. She shivered in the cool night air. He wanted nothing more than to warm her up, but that would have to wait.

“Miss Stackhouse,” Eric said as he opened her door and held her hand while she tried to maneuver into the passenger seat of his car. The short hem of her dress slid up, revealing more of her delicious tanned skin.

Sookie mumbled her thanks as he joined her.

His house was a five-minute drive. It was the longest five minutes of his life. Sookie was oddly quiet, which was making him anxious. By the time he pulled into his driveway, he was a bundle of nerves.

“It’s a beautiful house.” Sookie’s arms were locked behind her back as she walked around the living room.

“Thank you.” He suddenly wasn’t sure what to do with his hands, so he stuffed them in his pockets. “Can I offer you some…water?” he finished lamely.

“No, I’m perfect.” She blushed as she turned to face him. “I mean, contentedly full from dinner.”

“I think you’re perfect.”

Sookie laughed. “Hardly. Oh, before I forget, thank you for dinner.”

“You’re welcome.”

“And thank you for changing your business. There aren’t many men who would do that for a woman.”

“For the right woman.” He brushed a strand of her hair out of her face.

“How do you always know what to say?” She frowned. “You make me feel so…special. And not in the you’re-a-freak kind of special, which is what I’m used to.”

“You are special. There’s nothing ordinary about you.” He caressed her cheek.

She leaned into his hand and closed her eyes. “I’m nervous.”

“Me too,” he admitted.

“I make you nervous?” When she opened them, her eyes danced.

Instead of answering her, he held her face and kissed her. The warmth from her body enveloped him as she wrapped her arms around his neck, deepening the kiss. When she pulled away, her cheeks were a new shade of pink. She was smiling, and then she was kissing him again, more furious than before. Her body collided with his, pinning him against a wall. His hands roved over her ass, squeezing the globes of flesh. She filled his mouth with her moan. As she writhed against him, her dress moved up, giving his fingers a new plane to explore.

Sookie moaned and then whispered, “Can we go somewhere a little more comfortable?”

“Would you like to see my bedroom?” His eyebrows rose in a hopeful arch.

“Yes, but…” Sookie’s face was marred by an internal struggle.

“I’m not going to hurt you.”

She looked at him as if a switch had gone off, the turmoil calming instantly. “I believe you. I just… I don’t know…”

Eric put his finger to her lips. “I know.” He replaced his finger with his lips and kissed her tenderly. She opened her mouth to him and embraced him again. He tucked an arm under her knees and lifted her, carrying her toward the stairs.


Sookie nuzzled the base of his neck on the way downstairs. His skin was cool and smelled delicious, like some kind of candy. She nibbled the sensitive skin, which force a growl out of his throat.

“Careful Miss Stackhouse, or you’ll arouse the beast.” Eric put her down on his tall bed.

She was eyelevel with his dick, which was stretching the seams of his pants. “It looks like I already have.” She giggled and kicked her shoes off. She tucked her feet under her and kneeled on the edge of the bed. They were almost the same height. Perfect for kissing. She gripped the front of his shirt and dragged him closer. His fangs were out, and when their mouths met, her tongue explored the sharp points. He growled. He definitely had a thing for biting and fangs, go figure.

Eric’s hands fell on hers, guiding them to the buttons holding his shirt closed. One by one, she undid them, opening the material a little more each time. The soft light coming from the nightstand cast a golden hue across his smooth chest. Her fingers traced the outline of each muscle, which took a while because there were a lot of them. He held perfectly still while she caressed him, a serene look on his face. Suddenly very self-conscious, Sookie blushed.

“I’m sorry. I’ve just never touched a man like this before.”

“I’m not complaining.” Eric smiled, his fangs still on full display. “Touch me as much as you want.” He held his arms away from his body, inviting her to continue her exploration.

She pushed his shirt over his shoulders where it fell on the floor around his feet. The muscles attached to his ribs moved when she touched them. “Are you ticklish?”

Eric pressed his lips together.

She grinned and dragged her nails across each rib, making him flex as he wiggled. “I’ll take that as a yes.” Her hands swept up his body, brushing across his nipples. He moaned. She touched them again, and he moaned again. She bent her head close to his body and sucked one of his nipples into her mouth. He tasted as good as he smelled.

“Mm.” His eyes were closed and his face was slack.

She moved to the other nipple, flicking it with her tongue before sucking it into her mouth. When she bit it lightly, he growled again. She moved her mouth a little to the side and nibbled on his firm pec.

His body shook. She bit a new spot, eliciting the same response. He dug his fingers into her hair. “I’m going to come if you keep doing that.”

Sookie smiled and gave the mouthful of flesh a little tug before letting go. “Isn’t that the idea?”

“Ladies first.”


Eric lifted her face so he could kiss her again. Her body relaxed against him, her arms lose around his neck. He untangled his fingers from her hair and walked them down her spine until he found what he was looking for: the zipper on her dress.

Ziiiiiiip. The sound filled the room as he dragged the metal tab down ever so slowly. The flower-covered dress relaxed, hanging from her shoulders. The warm skin on either side of her spine sprouted goose bumps as he pushed the material out of the way.

He eased her arms by her side, pushing the straps off. Just as the dress fell, Sookie clutched it against her heaving breasts.

He lifted her chin until she was looking at him. “If you tell me to stop, I will.” A memory flickered behind his eyes, being forced to do something he didn’t want. He didn’t ever want to become a monster like that. “Guide me.” He put his hands on top of hers.

Slowly, she relaxed, moving their hands down, taking her dress with them, where it pooled around her knees on the bed. A strangled noise escaped his throat as he took in the sight of her beauty. Her bra and panties matched, both lacy white, a stark contrast to her tanned skin. He licked his lips, eager to taste her.

Her knees shook as she moved his hands up the sides of her body, around the swell in her breasts to the top, and then she stopped.

“I trust you.” Her hands fell away, giving him permission.

He caressed her lightly at first, tracing the outline of her delicate underthings. Her ragged breath filled his ears, spurring him on. He paused when his fingers moved to the clasp holding her bra closed. Sookie nodded and licked her lips.

Eric flicked the material open, the elastic pulling away from her skin, leaving a wake of goose bumps. She moaned as her full warm flesh filled his hands. Her dark pink nipples hardened instantly, begging for more attention.

Echoing her movements from a few minutes ago, Eric took her nipples into his mouth, one and then the other until Sookie was mewling. He planted wet kisses along her shoulders and across every inch of her breasts. His fangs scraped against the taut flesh and he resisted the urge to bury them inside her.

Sookie’s body began to waver. She seemed like she might fall over at any moment. In one swift movement, he cradled her body and positioned her on her back. Her blonde hair framed her head like a crown of gold. “Are you comfortable?”

Sookie smiled. “Yes.”

Eric bent his head back down, sucking and licking her breasts one more time before moving down. He kissed the soft curves of her hips and dragged his tongue across the top of her panties. When his face was hovering over her sex he inhaled. His body shuddered as his mind shut down. The heady scent of her arousal made him want to bite her and fuck her, but then he looked at her face. It was innocence mixed with desire. There was no need to rush. There would be time for everything.

He caressed her slit through her panties and her eyes closed. He pushed the lacy material to the side and dipped his finger inside her hot pussy, and was rewarded with a moan from Sookie’s lips. His cock lunged painfully against his zipper. Unable to wait, he sucked his finger clean, letting Sookie’s tangy flavor bloom in his mouth. It was almost too much for him to handle. He gripped the waistband of her panties and he smiled when she lifted her hips, helping him undress her.

Eric lifted her legs and dragged her to the edge of the bed, where he kneeled on the floor. His face was level with her sweet pussy and her luscious ass. Sookie used her elbows to prop herself up and watch him. He kissed the inside of her thighs and smiled as she bit her lip and nodded. She wanted more, and he was going to give it to her. He nuzzled her soft, round flesh, moving ever closer to her wet heat, and when his tongue finally made contact, a moan exploded out of Sookie’s mouth. He dug his fingers into her ass, holding her steady against his mouth so he could lick her clit over and over again. She fell back and screamed as she came, and her whole body shook. He thrust his tongue inside her, collecting the sweet reward of her orgasm. His hips jerked as her flavor invaded every inch of his mouth. His cock ached with jealousy.

His tongue moved in languid circles as she came down, slight vibrations moved through her body, radiating through his lips.

“Thank you, that was…” Sookie’s eyelids fluttered open as she spoke. “Amazing.”

“The best is yet to come.” Eric kissed her slippery sex one last time before he stood between her legs. His fingers touched the button of his pants.

Sookie was smiling as she struggled to sit. “Let me help you.”


When Sookie’s fingers touched his, Eric’s hands fell. Her throat was suddenly very dry, and she had to remind herself to breathe. The button gave way, exposing a flash of red shiny material surrounded by golden hairs. She skimmed against the fly, making his dick jump. She swallowed hard and then started tugging on the zipper. She pushed his pants down and caressed the silky material of his underwear, smiling as his body moved with each touch. She traced the contours of his hips, following the waistband of his flashy briefs, carefully avoiding the giant bulge. Eric’s eyes closed as her exploration continued. She traced the muscles in his legs, wrapping her hands around to grip his ass. She was rewarded with a growl.

Hesitantly, she dipped her fingers inside the waistband of his underwear. His dick moved, making her breath catch in her throat. When she peeled the material off of him, it was a little like opening a present. A really big present.

“Holy shit.”

His cock was jutting away from his body, thrusting toward her breasts. How was that going to fit inside her? She took a deep breath and touched him, her warm hands engulfing his cool length. His skin was so smooth and silky. She laced her fingers together and twisted her hands around his dick, making his hips jerk. Another twist and the head of his cock became slippery.

“Gah.” The sound came from deep inside Eric’s chest, and became louder the more she touched him.

She watched his face as she manipulated him, learning quickly what he liked and what he loved. Her confidence grew with each stroke.

Eric put his hands on hers, stilling her movement. Frowning, she looked up at him.

“I want to come inside you.” His words were gravely and forced through clenched teeth.

Sookie’s breath caught in her throat as her worry evaporated. She had never heard anything so sexy in all her life.

No more waiting.

Releasing her grip on his massive dick, she eased herself onto her back, scooting up onto the bed so he could join her.

Eric moved too quickly for her to follow, and then he was wedged between her legs, his slippery cock pressing against her wet lips. They both moaned at the initial contact.

“Ready?” He was trembling.


Eric tilted his hips down, aligning his length with her opening.

Sookie gasped as her body stretched around him, but Eric was moving so slowly that she didn’t feel pain. Only pleasure. And then he was in her all the way, holding perfectly still. Intense euphoria spiraled through her body, leaving her shaking like a leaf and hungry for more. She had never experienced such a powerful orgasm before. His eyes were squeezed shut and all the muscles in his jaw were clenched. She touched his face and struggled to speak. “Are you all right?”

His eyes snapped open. Only a hint of blue remained. She’d seen that look in his eyes before in the parking lot outside Glamoured. He was losing control.

She dragged her fingernails down his sides, making his cock thrust into her slightly as his body spasmed.

“Fuck. So hot. So tight.” His words caressed her mouth.

When she kissed him, she could taste herself on his lips, and then she licked his fangs, making him thrust harder than before. She moaned and licked his fangs again, and was instantly rewarded with another slam of his hips. He was obviously trying to protect her, but all she wanted was to arouse the beast inside him.

Sookie trailed a line of kisses against his cool skin, along his jaw and down the side of his neck. She licked his skin and he started moving again, his pelvis rubbing against hers, filling her with a second round of brain-numbing pleasure. When she opened her mouth and gripped his skin with her teeth, his whole body tensed. He slammed into her over and over again, his cock swelling inside her as they came together.


Eric’s dick hardened inside her quivering pussy.

“Again?” She was smiling.

“Again,” Eric said as he flipped their bodies so she was straddling him. He gripped her hips possessively, setting the pace for their second union.

Sookie’s mouth fell open and her eyes became unfocused as she learned how to move. Her fingernails dug into his shoulders as she moved faster and faster, and then her hot, tight muscles were milking him, threatening to steal another orgasm by sheer force. Her body fell forward, pushing her breasts into his face.

He opened his eager mouth and sucked her swollen nipple inside, eliciting a moan from her ragged throat. His tongue and dick moved in unison, thrusting and licking until Sookie was on the verge of another orgasm.

“Bite me.” Her words were accompanied by a moan.

Eric hesitated for a minute.

She forced her breast farther into his mouth. “Bite. Me.”

His fangs slid into her soft flesh just as he lifted his hips to thrust into her, bringing them to another orgasm together.

Sookie screamed.

Worried that he hurt her, Eric opened his mouth, but Sookie cradled his head to her breast, encouraging him to eat as she rode him through the waning orgasmic pulses. He licked and healed the tiny wound and then pulled Sookie into his arms, her warm pliable flesh molding to his. He never wanted to let her go.

“Did I hurt you?”

Sookie’s hair rubbed against his chest as she shook her head. “No. It was so good.”

Eric beamed and kissed the top of her head. “Mmm.”

She sighed. “I’ve never experienced so much pleasure in all my life. Thank you.”

“The pleasure was all mine.”

She shook her head again. “Nope, I had my fair share.”

“There’s more where that came from.” He pulled her into a kiss and then Sookie’s arms were around him and they were moving together again.

He knew he would spend the rest of her life making her happy.


Review please. You know I love them. On to Glamoured: Epilogue

36 thoughts on “Glamoured: Chapter 14

  1. askarsgirl says:

    Loved it and I loved this story. Can’t wait to read the epilogue and any other Eric and Sookie stories that you will hopefully write!


  2. theladykt says:

    Woo hoo Yummy ending lemon


  3. duckbutt60 says:

    Sigh..perfect, just perfect!


  4. ljhjelm says:

    That is one hot chapter.


  5. jules3677 says:

    Excellently done writing the changing point of view. Didn’t lose anything in the differing views, rather enhanced the scene. It is the perfect ending. Thankyou.


    • Thank YOU for such a lovely review! There was so much going on for both of them, I couldn’t stick with a single POV. Some of it needed to be told by Sookie, and some by Eric, so I thought splitting it up would be good. I’m glad you agree. 🙂 I am so glad you enjoyed the ending. Sorry you had to wait so long for it! The epilogue is coming soon!


  6. msbuffy says:

    Wow. I know what I want for Christmas.


    • Oh wait! I know this one…give me a minute, I’ll guess…

      Is it your very own Viking? Mm hm, thought so. I think he’s on all of our lists. 🙂

      Thanks for reviewing!


      • msbuffy says:

        LOL! You’d think so, but at my age, that’s more likely to cause the big death instead of many little ones! However, visuals, yeah, visuals would be lovely!
        My professional review: Stunning, brilliantly written; the differing POV’s only enhance the chapter making the flames between these two figuratively melt one’s screen! This isn’t mere creativity; this is erotica at its’ finest! An epilogue of the same caliber is sure to follow.


      • Aww! Thank you!! I love your professional review! I am very sorry for the melting of your screen. I guess you better put it on my tab, huh? 🙂 I only hope the epilogue lives up to your expectations.

        Thank you again…so very lovely of you to be all nice to me and stuff. 🙂


  7. lostinspace33 says:

    GAH! That was fantastic!


  8. valady1 says:

    Masterfully written, it takes real talent to write intimacy like this and keeping it from either becoming too clinical sounding, or too crass. This was perfect. I’ll be looking for the epilogue alert.


  9. ozzo says:



  10. estrella75 says:

    finally! I was missing your lemons!


    • I am so sorry for the delay! Real life takes its toll sometimes, doesn’t it? That’s definitely true for me. November and December nearly kill me every year…and I am sorry that it kept me from writing. I am so glad you enjoyed the lemons…I aim to please! 🙂


  11. Yvonn Ad says:

    OMG, that was so hot my browser shut down…LOL.
    So worth the wait. After i finish this story i’m going to buy your books. I’ve been busy and i know that if i but your books now i might lose track on this busy month.
    Love you your stories as always.
    I’m thinking of stories for you if thats ok. If i come up with something i’ll keep you posted.


    • Yvonn, you flatter me!! I’m so glad you loved this story, and I’m thrilled that you’re going to buy my books. I hope you love them too. 🙂 December nearly kills me every year, so I hear ya…

      Please, any time you have story ideas, you keep me posted and we’ll see what comes of it! I love new ideas, so I always appreciate it when sharing them happens! 🙂

      Thank you so much for the lovely review!!


  12. meridiean says:

    All together now: AWWWW!!! Loved it! Now, you know we’re gonna want more, right? I can definitely see another 100 short chapters, or, I dunno, another 45 loooong chapters…look into my eyes…you can see it, too, right? Look a little closer…RIGHT? 😀


  13. NorthmanCullen says:

    that was a seriously hot chapter!! where’s a Viking when you need one?!


  14. Tiffany says:

    Worth the wait and even more excited for the epi! : )


  15. itsamia71 says:

    Beautiful & perfect & oh so hot! And an epilogue to look forward to!!!
    I’m so glad you’re still feeling inspired to write E/S – it feels like a lot of people are losing their mojo for them at the moment & that makes me sad.


    • Thank you so much! I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter, even though it took far too long to post… I hope you enjoy the epilogue as much!

      There is never a shortage of E/S inspiration, especially when I get ideas from readers! There’s more coming…don’t you worry. 🙂


  16. sluggysmom says:

    WOO HOO!! *fans face*


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